Now, not only adult who work everyday looking for money, but so do child. There are many children working in many industries and factories. It is happened in many countries. Many children don’t go to school but they go working everyday. They use their power to work. They will get some money after working. Children have many reasons why they work. They must think about their future. They shouldn't work as labors.(Your views is not reflected in this paragraph)
There are so many reasons why child work. Usually, the child is from poor family who get the difficulties of looking for money. If money is difficult to find, they will be hard to get food also. They need food for stay alive. Nowdays the cost of many things are raising up. It will make worry about getting many things that is needed everyday. Paying the children working is cheap. Children don’t have many skills. Children only have power to do something. They don’t have enough skills and minds. So, people use their power to work in the factories.
Children are not in the working ages. They should study in class. Study for looking for many knowledge. Children will become the next generation for the nation. So they should not work. Children capacity is not for working. Beside study usually they also still happy in playing. If children don’t have knowledge, they will not be developed.
Fix your 1st paragraph so that I can give comments.
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